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Sixth Draft of Visitations Thriller

Filed under: Uncategorized — Ernesto Oporto @ 4:31 PM, June 22, 2014

Ok, the manuscript has been sitting on the shelf for a month now. It’s time to make the next major revision.

I’m going to make the Chapters shorter, with fewer scenes, which will allow me to add more page turners and surprises at the end of the chapter.

And I’m going to be nastier with the male lead, hurt him some more, kill another of his friends, keep the tension growing.


  1. Hi, I’m a moderator for the site, You signed our linky list last week, but I can’t find your #8sunday post. Unfortunately, I’ll have to delete your name/link from the list. If this was an error, I apologize, and ask you to sign up with the url directing participants to the page your post is on, not your homepage. Thanks. Teresa

    Comment by Teresa Cypher — June 22, 2014 @ 6:51 PM

  2. I don’t understand which one is your linky list. I approved the Sixth Draft of Visitations Thriller blog at I may have tried to show it in twitter. Check it now.

    Comment by ernestooporto — June 22, 2014 @ 7:51 PM

  3. Hi Ernesto,

    Sorry, it seems there is some confusion. Maybe someone else signed you up for
    Weekend Writing Warriors Linksy list where we share 8 sentences from a published/unpublished work on our blogs.

    I hope you have a good week,


    Comment by Teresa Cypher — June 23, 2014 @ 3:08 AM

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